In Room 9 we are learning to write information reports. We are learning how to structure these correctly. We need to remember to include:
- an introduction which is a general statement about the topic
- a body which describes what we are writing about
- a conclusion which is a summary and a personal comment.
Here are some of the reports we have written:
Dogs
First what is a
dog?
A dog is a furry animal
for a pet or a working animal. Dogs are mans best friend. They have different
breeds. Dogs play with you
Try’s to jump on
you and try’s to rip up your clothes.
People choose
different breeds of dogs because of the way they live., what they do and how
friendly they are.
Some dogs have a
job. Some are police dogs and they track down criminals and find lost and
naughty people.
In the olden days
people used Ridgebacks for fighting lions.
Also in the olden
days American Bulldogs were used in wars.
Golden Retrievers
and Labradors are used as Guide Dogs to guide blind people.
Golden Retrievers
are used for Hunting, when a person shoots a duck the dog retrieves it by bringing
it back.
When dogs are in a
car they put their heads out the window.
Dogs love going
for walks and runs.
Torben
Fox Terriers
Fox terriers
are very intelligent. They are mostly
brown and white. Fox terriers live in
insulated beds. My dogs like to listen
to the radio in the shed so they don’t get lonely or sad. They are very good pets and their sense of
smell is very good.
They are
powerful, fast, intelligent little animals and they are very good at catching
rabbits because of their sense of smell and speed. There are lots of different breeds like
Dalmation, British Bull Dogs, Poodle and Fox Terrier.
Be nice take them for a walk, throw
them a stick.
Jake
DOGS
Dogs are
allowed to do most things like run in the park and dig up mum's flower beds,
but they're trying to be your friends.
The pups are trying to snuggle between you to keep warm.
You
can treat your dog well with insulation in the dog's house or give your dog a
bed inside its house and let the pups inside.
This
is what you give your dog: a dog house,
water bowl, food bowl, soft toys and rubber toys for the pups and litter box.
You
can train your dog to do special tricks like: catch a ball, roll over, jump in
the air and pounce on a ball.
Police dogs sniff out
criminals that have escaped from a prison. Airport security dogs sniff out bags
that might have drugs in them. Guide dogs help blind people cross the road.
Riley
DOGS
A dog can be
man’s best friend. They also can be your pet or work with you. The dogs bite
your clothes because it’s nice and chewy. If you throw a stick really far it
will run as fast as the wind and come back with it. When your dog’s whine or barks
sometimes it just wants to lick you. When the dog plays with you it is fun and
when they poke their tongue out it means they are waiting for you to come and
play. Farm dogs round up sheep and cows because that is what they are trained
to do. Police dogs are trained to catch criminals. Family dogs sometimes sleep
in a kennel outside and some sleep inside, even on our bed.
Some dogs
are smelly and so are their beds if you don’t clean them. Their owners feed
them dog biscuits, and meat but they love to chew on bones. They play with cats
and slippers. Guard dogs help people if they are in danger. We have a little
baby guard dog and he guards me. My dog is only a baby and tries to eat chicken
food. I think puppies are cute and dogs are really intelligent.
By
Lennox
DOGS
They can run around with the owner. A police dog chases naughty people. A dog
digs holes around places and can jump around.
It can help you get the sheep in.
A dog can hide in long grass. A
dog can swim in the sea. It digs holes
in the sand. It digs deep in the
sand. A guide dog helps blind people.
By Harrison
Dogs
Dogs are man’s best
friend. They jump and lick.
There are all kinds of
breeds, like hunting dogs or rescue dogs.
There are lots more.
Dogs have to have clean
water.
Dogs do exercise, running,
walking and jumping.
There are three ways to get
puppies. One, get born from a girl
mother, two, get it from the vet and three, find them on the side of the road.
I love dogs because they are
intelligent.
Abby
Dogs
Dogs
are fun and helpful for hunting.
Some
dogs are small, some are big. Most dogs are black, white and brown.
Hunting
dogs are very useful for shooting and hunting down pigs, deer, goats and sheep.
Sheep
dogs help farmers to round up sheep.
Dogs are a lot of work but they give
you hours and hours of fun.
By Azlan
Dogs
A dog is
man’s best friend. They can be a pet or help you with your work. Dogs come in
many different breeds.
Man’s best friend
Men are
stronger than women
A dog is
man’s best friend. Men are tough and they make games like wrestling fun because
they are strong. Men can also throw a stick further.
Games
that dogs play with men
Dogs play
many different games with men such as tug of war, fetch, racing on a long lead
and sniff out the biscuits. These games can be fun.
How to
play these games
Every game
with you and your dog needs a bit of training. You also need to know how to
play them. And this is how you play them. Fetch is pretty easy. All you have to
do is throw a ball or a stick. The dog has to go and grab the ball or stick.
Then they have to come back to you and drop it at your feet. Tug of war is
pretty easy to. All you have to do is you and the dog pull in different
directions. Another fun game is when you sit on a wheelie chair hold on to the
toy and the dog pulls you around.
Pets
Dog are pets
as well. Dogs like to play with you. You have to give them clean water and feed
them night and day.
Working dogs
There are
lots of working dogs like hunter, guard and guide dogs.
It’s amazing
how intelligent dogs are.
Written by
Hayley
Dogs
Dogs are
furry, cute and cuddly! Some dogs are
big and some dogs are small. They live
in kennels and sleep in kennels too. Some are micro-chipped. There are all sorts of breeds. Dogs eat dog biscuits and meat. Dogs say “Woof, Woof”. Dogs are soft and they chew on light
bones. Dogs play in the dirt and round
up sheep. They play with squeaky toys,
shoes and slippers.
I like dogs because they are very
intelligent and they are good at doing tricks.
By Mila
DOGS
Dogs are nice and they are man’s best friend. Dogs usually sleep in the laundry, the shed,
or inside. Dogs like to sleep in warm
places such as: by the fire, on a warm blanket, or in a bed. Dogs to do things
like play fetch, run around with you, and jumping. Dogs LOVE to eat, dogs eat chicken, beef,
sheep, and dog biscuits. Dogs are cute, cuddly, furry, and playful. A lot of people have dogs. People take dogs for walks at the park. Dogs need a walk once a day. Dogs are very fast runners, and are good
swimmers. I like dogs!
Caelan
RUGBY
Rugby is
for boys and girls. It is very
popular. A lot of children play rugby
because it is so fun! At rugby there is a BIG field with a lot of grass. Did
you know that adults play rugby? There
are a lot of types of rugby, there is: ripper rugby, tackle rugby, and rugby league,
but I don’t know the other types of rugby. Rugby helps people get fit and
strong. Every week after a game of rugby, there is a player of the day. A lot
of children play rugby!
Caelan
DOGS
Man’s best friend. A dog can be a man’s best friend.
Man’s best friend - If your dog likes you it will play with you and follow you. The dog will lick you. It will sleep on your clothes because it knows that is the smell of you. Your dog will cry when you leave them.
Pets - If you have a dog you would feed it red meat, bones, biscuits and CLEAN WATER! You should always train your dog to not bite or scratch. All dogs need exercise, like taking them for runs and walks. If you teach dogs tricks, it’s really fun!
How can you tell dogs are happy?
You can tell a dog is happy by wagging its tail. If you pat a dog it will poke its tongue out.
Are dogs intelligent?
I think dogs are intelligent because they can do jobs just like humans. They can have these kinds of jobs:
A guide dog
Police dog
Rescue dog
Drug dog
Food dog
Fighting dog
Guard dog
Conclusion
I think dogs are intelligent because they can do all these jobs.
Tennis
By Taleia
Introduction
Tennis is a fun sport
for boys and girls.
Do you have to
train hard to be a good tennis player?
Yes! You do have
to train hard because that’s how you get to be a professional at tennis.
What kind of
parts does a racquet have?
A tennis racquet has
three parts. One of them is the head of the racquet. Another one on the racquet
is the neck, the straight bit on the racquet. The last one is the string.
Tennis racquets also come in different colours and sizes.
Things to do to
become a great tennis player!!
You will need a
really experienced coach to train you. Another thing you need is a place to
train. The last thing you need is a tennis racquet and tennis balls.
Things you need
to play a game of tennis.
You will need to
be able to do a forhand and backhand hit and also a serve. You will need to be
fit and strong and be able to move quickly in different directions.
A great tennis
player is Maria Sharapova.
Maria Sharapova is
a great tennis player. Her rank is 3rd
place in the whole world! Maria is sponsored by Nike. She is 26 years old!
Conclusion
Tennis is a fun
sport to play and keeps you fit and strong.
