Monday 12 August 2013

Cross Country by Ryder

WALT:  write sentences for effect

REMEMBER TO:
  • write simple sentences that have one idea
  • write compound sentences with two ideas using a joining word like 'and', 'to' or  'but'
On Wednesday 6 August, Room 9 went down to the Clevedon School field.  The first race was at 9:30am.  Mrs Schumacher was the announcer for first, second and third.  I came 10th out of 11.  Pohutukawa, Totara and Kauri teams got bumps and bruises.  Mum and Dad cheered me on.  I was quick.  The teachers wore hi-visibility vests.

1 comment:

  1. Ryder I think you set the scene very well. I hope all of the teams have recovered from their bumps and bruises.

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