REMEMBER TO:
- write simple sentences that have one idea
- write compound sentences with two ideas using a joining word like 'and', 'to' or 'but'
In the holidays I went to Eden Park with my dad and friends to see the Chiefs versus the Blues. The Chiefs won 25 - 16. It was sort of good because when they scored it was under big rucks. We had hot dogs for dinner. They were hot. They were yummy.
I enjoyed reading your story, Harrison. It sounds like you had a great time with your family at the rugby.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used because, (a joining word), to elaborate why the game was good.
Keep up the good writing.